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Re: Darkness Rising
Kiro His eyes followed the movement of the creature that leapt at the male Izci who'd just caught himself a female Kaiser with a shackle to the ankle. He howled ...
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Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed
Gabriel Once he'd finished using the rock as a mortar to mash the needles into a pulp he tossed the rock away as he scooped it into his hand and ...
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Re: Darkness Rising
Kiro His claws gouged into the woman's flesh, her cry of pain as he sliced into her was all that he needed to spurr him on before the chain around ...
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Re: Darkness Rising
Alexiss She overlooked the Bastilin village, it was large to her concern but she knew that most of them either sold or enslaved the few Kaisers that remained in the ...
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Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed
Gabriel "So what now?" asked the boy after having tucked his pipe in his pack. Gabriel dropped the bow to the ground and pulled off his pack, setting it on ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed
Gabriel His head whipped around and his dark gaze settled on the newcomer - a boy from District three. He reacted before he heard the words from Holly's mouth and ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed
Gabriel Haughting His hands shook as he tore away the barricade, the butterflies were quickly dwindling but he knew he wouldn't have a simple walk with them around. His mind ...
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Re: Darkness Rising
Alexiss Her eyes flew open, and she inhaled with a gasp. Her hand reached out and touched the bow that lay askew on the ground. Oh, dear. She thought briefly, ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Darkness Rising
Alexiss The wind was a cool relief after rrunning to follow the beasts who had escaped- my idiotic team had found them before I had and were now running off ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Sweet dreams of Hate
Prologue. The sun bled through the cracks of the boards that covered the windows and striped the clothing of the child that sat hunched in the middle of the room. ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Sado-Masochism
Wow, that was brilliant. There's not much to critique on it and the way you placed each stanza as a haiku it was really creative. I don't remember reading a ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed
Gabriel Haughtings He pulled open the wooden doors of the stables and looked up at the sky - the damned butterfly creatures were still there but they seemed attracted by ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: When.
O.O Hiya, Written here. When I read your poem I absolutely fell in love with it. Honestly, I came here to give you a review and I will : I've ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Written here, come to give you a review :) Alright, once reading your poem I could understand what you meant by having to deny everything you stand up for just ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: True Face and Bleeding Heart
Hiya, Written here. Right at the moment the first thing that comes to mind after having read these poems is Wow. *Shakes head.* just wow. Your first poem Bleeding Heart, ...
Mar 17, 2011
