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Re: What would happen if?
Lena Vitroski ~ One last miracle The pain was intense, it overtook her every sense, the wings on her back were tied tightly with rope to a pillar behind her. ...
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Re: Chapter Five
Chapter Five: Demonic Surprises “Angels are the offspring of the Goddess Aphrodite and the God Ares. Together war and love combined made passion, thus creating a being that was capable ...
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Re: After Adonis Ch. 4
Hiyaa, Written here or Wisp as some like to call me - I've got a perfect little review for you but since I'm short on time I'll start with the ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Four
Author's Note - Everything I've posted so far has needed to be edited, but I hope you all enjoy this next part where I introduce a new character and one ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed
Gabriel His eyes narrowed he felt an intense pain shoot up his leg from her kick to his knee. He immediately grabbed one of the arrows from his quiver and ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
Oh goodness, poor demon boy. -- Drae and Lew from Heaven's Child. Drae rummaged through the stack of DVDs, there had to be something decent to watch or rather something ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
Lew from Heaven's Child ~ He opened his eyes to the hazy sunlight that streamed in from the boarded window, his head ached with a fiercness that he didn't enjoy ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Confession Is Good For The Soul (Part 1)
Hiya, just decided to scroll throuhg some readings and stumbled across your piece here. :) I only found two little nitpicks. It all started when we moved into the Freedom ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Violet Saga: Chapter One Rewrite: Re-edited
This chapter is very good, I do like the rewrite that you've done, it's clear to understand and I like how the emotions are very pronounced. One thing - I ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Three
Chapter Three: Memory lane Some things never last. Drae sighed as she finished off the last page of the romance she was reading, she’d finished Twilight the other day and ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: The Unwanted ( Chapter one )
Wow, this was a really great read. I've just been minding my own business when suddenly I came across your piece of work and I loved it! This character, Violet ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed
Gabriel He let a casual smile slide over his features, softning the usual hard mask of determination as he glanced over at Ara. "Mind if I ask why you're watching ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Hunger Games 4 - Closed
Gabriel He narrows his eyes and pulls an arrow from his quiver and notches it, just as one of the wolves turn towards him. He lets the arrow fly, landing ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Chapter Two
Chapter Two : Blindfolded She was insane. There was no denying the truth any longer, it would simply catch up to her and stick her in the forehead. She understood ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One
Authors Note ~ Hi everyone, glad you've decided to check out this piece of my work. I'd just like to point out that this is a rough draft. I have ...
Apr 13, 2011
