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  • Script » General, General Re: Born a Peach, Die a Hero

    WritingWords here. I absolutely really liked this!! It was F-U-N-N-Y!! I really liked the random bits of dumb things that your characters say. I especially liked the part where the ...

    Sun Nov 28, 2010 4:46 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Never let me go *Edited*

    WritingWords here, with your super-fast review! :D While I read this, I noticed a lot of spelling mistakes. They were very distracting to read over. Could you please go back ...

    Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:07 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Leah Mayfield (Ch.1) *Edited*

    Wow...gives me a chilled feeling. I like your style of writing. But the first paragraphs made me want to stop reading becuase generally, I don't like to read grueling stuff. ...

    Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:24 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Let Me Love You(19)

    WritingWords here with your super-fast reviews you requested! Okay, honestly I didn't read the chapters before this, but this really made me curious about what happened before this. Also, I ...

    Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:12 pm
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Never let me Go

    I'm still working on this but I'm stuck... Tell me what you think of it so far... My lips are chapped red and swallow huh? but I don’t care lets ...

    Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:17 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes (Chapter 1)

    WritingWords here with your requested review!! It's been a while since I read this, but I will still try to review it the best I can. I really don't like ...

    Mon Aug 30, 2010 3:55 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Suicide (remake sort of)

    Hey, WritingWords here with the super-fast review you requested!! So, what I think: You really expressed your feelings here and connected with the reader. Well, in my case, you did. ...

    Thu Aug 12, 2010 12:39 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Swimming Against the Kolyma River (edited)

    Hi, there! This is WritingWords with the review you requested! I personally thought that the paragraphs of this chapter aren't balanced in length. For me, the length of the paragraphs ...

    Fri Aug 06, 2010 12:39 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Forever Summer

    Hey there! WritingWords here with your super cool review! Just kidding.. My first impression of this was, I want to know more about this character. I didn't necessarily like or ...

    Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:53 pm
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Luxuria

    Writing Words, with the super-fast review you requested! I agreed with the person who said your tense was confusing at the beginning. You have to make it more clearly at ...

    Fri Jul 09, 2010 3:51 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Ecole des Monstres: Chapter I

    Wow...this story gave me the goosebumps. :D it was sort of cool with the flashbacks. A few nitpicks: Dad began to leaf through his brief case, a large smile crossing ...

    Wed Jun 23, 2010 2:53 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My baby Kronus

    Wow...I really liked this.It's simple, the reader can feel what YOU feel, which is the most important thing in poetry. A few grammar/spelling mistakes: I knew he’d gone before I ...

    Wed Jun 23, 2010 2:38 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Zombies in the Black

    WritingWords here, with your super-fast review! :D Like: Green Errors: Red Suggestions: Blue To be lost, cliche or not, was truly how it felt, with a growing darkness merging to ...

    Wed Jun 23, 2010 2:19 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Forgetting (Edited)

    Okay, WritingWords here!! First of all, I really have NO idea what your story is about. No hint of what's going to happen, no foreshadowing...I know that you're trying to ...

    Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:12 pm
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Just 1411 left

    Hey, this is WritingWords! First of all, I like your topic and title. It is more catchy than just, "Save the Tigers!" You captured the reader's attention with "Just 1411 ...

    Sun May 16, 2010 8:05 pm


what are stories if not just vehicles for the pain of your own heart
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