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  • Script » General, General Re: Born a Peach, Die a Hero

    WritingWords here. I absolutely really liked this!! It was F-U-N-N-Y!! I really liked the random bits of dumb things that your characters say. I especially liked the part where the ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Never let me go *Edited*

    WritingWords here, with your super-fast review! :D While I read this, I noticed a lot of spelling mistakes. They were very distracting to read over. Could you please go back ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Leah Mayfield (Ch.1) *Edited*

    Wow...gives me a chilled feeling. I like your style of writing. But the first paragraphs made me want to stop reading becuase generally, I don't like to read grueling stuff. ...

    Sep 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Let Me Love You(19)

    WritingWords here with your super-fast reviews you requested! Okay, honestly I didn't read the chapters before this, but this really made me curious about what happened before this. Also, I ...

    Sep 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Never let me Go

    I'm still working on this but I'm stuck... Tell me what you think of it so far... My lips are chapped red and swallow huh? but I don’t care lets ...

    Sep 1, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes (Chapter 1)

    WritingWords here with your requested review!! It's been a while since I read this, but I will still try to review it the best I can. I really don't like ...

    Aug 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Suicide (remake sort of)

    Hey, WritingWords here with the super-fast review you requested!! So, what I think: You really expressed your feelings here and connected with the reader. Well, in my case, you did. ...

    Aug 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Swimming Against the Kolyma River (edited)

    Hi, there! This is WritingWords with the review you requested! I personally thought that the paragraphs of this chapter aren't balanced in length. For me, the length of the paragraphs ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Forever Summer

    Hey there! WritingWords here with your super cool review! Just kidding.. My first impression of this was, I want to know more about this character. I didn't necessarily like or ...

    Jul 26, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Luxuria

    Writing Words, with the super-fast review you requested! I agreed with the person who said your tense was confusing at the beginning. You have to make it more clearly at ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Ecole des Monstres: Chapter I

    Wow...this story gave me the goosebumps. :D it was sort of cool with the flashbacks. A few nitpicks: Dad began to leaf through his brief case, a large smile crossing ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My baby Kronus

    Wow...I really liked this.It's simple, the reader can feel what YOU feel, which is the most important thing in poetry. A few grammar/spelling mistakes: I knew he’d gone before I ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Zombies in the Black

    WritingWords here, with your super-fast review! :D Like: Green Errors: Red Suggestions: Blue To be lost, cliche or not, was truly how it felt, with a growing darkness merging to ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Forgetting (Edited)

    Okay, WritingWords here!! First of all, I really have NO idea what your story is about. No hint of what's going to happen, no foreshadowing...I know that you're trying to ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Just 1411 left

    Hey, this is WritingWords! First of all, I like your topic and title. It is more catchy than just, "Save the Tigers!" You captured the reader's attention with "Just 1411 ...

    May 16, 2010


That's just what translation is, I think. That's all speaking is. Listening to the other and trying to see past your own biases to glimpse what they're trying to say. Showing yourself to the world, and hoping someone else understands.
— Ramy (Babel by R. F. Kuang)