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Re: Bracken
Hey there, Rayneisthename! Once again, welcome to YWS! Tis WD here, as requested. Now, I don't review or write poetry much anymore, but I will do my best to help ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: Prologue - Charmed Devils
Heyhey MrsDominicHoward! Welcome to YWS! I'm WD, and it's lovely to meet you! I am here to review your prologue. ^^ So, this is interesting--you have a lot of good ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: Starched, Even (short story)
Hi there mechi! Glad I stumbled across this short story! I'm WD, and it's nice to meet you. So, this story has a lot of potential--you already have some honest ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: The Battle
Hey there Jalmoc! I'm WD, and it's lovely to meet you. Interesting little battle scene you have here, and it's not half-bad, especially for someone written off the top of ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: adam1
Hi ginger! Tis WD here as requested! First of all, welcome to YWS! Glad you made your way to this lovely site. So, I don't really write a lot of ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Rosewood (working title)
Hi there BadNarrator! Glad I got around to reading this! I'm WD, lovely to meet you. This is a really interesting story, and I think you have a lot of ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: The Lie of a Normal Life
Hi GoldenQuill! Tis WD here! This was a great read--I love the originality with which you approached this subject, the way the first person narrator speaks and the parallelism between ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Hot Sunset Pt. 1
Hi there Periablo! I'm WD, and it's nice to meet you! This was a great read! As has been said, I really admired the simplicity of this piece and the ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] Attack of the Killer Sea bear!
Hi there Nutty! Tis WD here! This was really fun to read. :) Like others have mentioned, I liked the reveal here, and I was not expecting it. It was ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Train accident
Hey there megsug! I'm WD and it's lovely to meet you. I'm glad I stumbled across this story! So, a lot of the things I had to point out have ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: [September Contest] The Beautiful Mortician.
Hi there FRAYEDjade! Glad I stumbled across this story! I'm WD, and it's lovely to meet you! So, you have an interesting story. That theme you got from the generator ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Camping
Hey there Elinor! Glad I got around to this! To begin with a disclaimer, you probably know that I don't really write or review poetry regularly anymore, so take my ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: a moment of realisation, edit
Hey there Phaix! I'm WD, and I'm going to be your reviewer today! This is a nice little piece--I like the unanswered questions. It feels like the beginning of something ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The Sorcerer's Emporium of Enchanted Objects
Hey there aidyl! First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm WD, and it's lovely to meet you! Anyways, I'll get on to the story. :) You have a really great ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: The Legendary Power (Chapters 1-2)
Hey there JackpotJohnson! I'm WD and it's lovely to meet you. ^^ You have some interesting ideas here, and I think this could go somewhere, but it seems to be ...
May 24, 2010
