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Thanks for this. I use passive voice far too much, especially the adverb thing. :wink: As Snoink and nerdpony mentioned, passive voice can be very effective if used correctly, but ...

There are many different methods that work, but the one I prefer is mentioning that x amount of years have gone by within the first few paragraphs. Not necessarily first ...

Rhymezone is my best friend. Rhymes, synonyms, definitions... miracles do happen. :D

Sometimes you can take real words that aren't used too often or are used often and use them for names. (For instance, one of my characters is named Far) I ...

I wasn't sure how you wanted the poem's format to look, so I showed what it would look like if it were formatted like most poems are. You don't have ...

Your stuff isn't bad... definitely not bad; it just needs work. Okay, here's some crit: Mounds of Dirt I would suggest finding a more inviting title. It isn't bad, just ...

That is really hard to read. Please break it into stanzas and I will give constructive criticism