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(hey, I haven't post a poem in a long time, but decided I might as well post my latest poem for English. It might be a little cliche and I ...

I'm using Standard Purple. I tried the dark, but I didn't like it. It was too... dark

:evil: s...p...e...l...l...i...n...g ERRORS!!!! *twitches and trembles* PET PEEVE!!! :x ...besides that, brilliance, smaur, pure brilliance... it was touching. :shock: :lol:

Love the singing! EXPLOSIVES! hee hee! :twisted: :shock:

Welcome to YWS! Okay, first I am going to say (referring to the poll) that you should keep posting and writing no matter how harsh or unsatisfied people are with ...

Ooooh, classics! I loved: A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens Kidnapped by Robert Louis Stevenson Lord of the Rings (since we are considering it a classic) by Tolkien ...

I'm reading Rise of a Hero now... the sequel to Flame by Hilari Bell. I was so angry when I thought the sequel wasn't out yet because the end of ...

I LOVE to reread books. Sometimes it's hard to not skip sections because you know what happens next, but with the suspense and plot aside, you can focus on the ...

This was interesting and sweet. I liked the theme of the poem, but I felt you had much room for improvement here. Welcome to YWS She has so much, But ...

Thank you for looking at this, Snoink, and your questions did help me with this. Danke. So, I edited the parts I agreed needed help. Thanks to all - I ...

No offense taken, Misty. Thank you so much. I'll edit this again and answer blob's last question tomorrow.

Thank you very much blob and poor_imp I edited it Agh, feigningly... typo!! Grrrr

Okay, I wasn't sure where to put this: Fantasy Fiction or Other or Writing Tips. This is two paragraphs from the novel I'm working on and I need help with ...

This was pretty good. You had some decent imagery and good word choice, but sometimes I felt you were trying almost too hard. I wasn't fond of your introductory; It ...

I really enjoyed this poem. You have a beautiful vocabulary and some great imagery, but I have just a few nitpicks to point out... screaming like a jackrabbit cornered at ...