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"We gotta stop trusting those literary agents, I'm telling ya. Give me a squad, we'll grab one of them at gunpoint, drag their ass back here and beat it out ...

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Ah, Lampshade... Hi! :D

Writing is fun for me, but I put if I stopped, I'd die because writing is my main outlet for emotion. Without it, I'd be a hormonal, emotional wreck. If ...

I live upon the word 'um' :D

I am hopelessly attached to my characters. Killing characters is painful. I had 'kind of kill' a character - more of make him disappear for 20 months - and I ...

Rhymezone is my best friend. Rhymes, synonyms, definitions... miracles do happen. :D

“What is it?” Rayan asked with a hint of disgust. Corrode lowered his head. The ground was littered with burnt fragments of gray stones and weeds protruded from the overturned ...

This is MUCH better, Killer-Ewok! Very nicely done! Your pace is much more believable; you describe the setting well and without too many words and your word choice has improved. ...

"TELL ME WHERE THEY ARE!" roared Arieras. [intense beginning- catches reader attention] He hit the orc across the face with his shield. "I..I.. don't know" The orc stuttered. [no slight ...

Hello! I liked the way you created suspense in this story and left us hanging a little near the end. You gave us enough information to understand a snippet of ...

Hey yoha-ahoy! This poem was very straightforward and you definitely conveyed your point, but I think it could have been done in a more creative way. In this poem, you ...

*claps* Yay! You're writing poetry! This was very well done! I echo all the comments above, just had one small thing I noticed high healed shoes Do you mean high-heeled? ...

Thanks xanthan! Yes, I see what you mean, especially in the first stanza.