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Re: Horrors of Lecraesa
I'm half-dreading ending Tears because I have to kill some characters. Three of the four who die are antagonists, but, even though this is bound to seem crazy, I love ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: Horrors of Lecraesa
Killing Characters ... is an ultimate source of agony. In planning, I never imagined how hard it would be to kill a character, but when I finally killed that character ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 3 (Arillo)
Chapter 3 continued Morning came, and the sun peered through the clouds for the first time in a few days; a sheer film of mud smudged Creiha’s window, but light ...
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: Gabrion Skies
*glomps* Thank you so much, CL!
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 2 (A Ruined Courtyard)
Oh my goodness! *bursts into laughter* I totally just said that Markus had olive eyes and brown eyes in the same paragraph! Thanks for pulling that part out... wow.
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: Horrors of Lecraesa
Spotlight Stealers I have a love-hate relationship with spotlight stealers. What are spotlight stealers? They are the interesting characters who you write into your story, intending for them to be ...
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 3 (Arillo)
Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Another longer chapter. I think I might end up splitting up some of the later chapters ...
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: The Line: Re-appearing (Chap 1)Unedited Version
Oooh, this was very nice. And very interesting. You asked for constructive criticism... so here I go. I am known for being very nitpicky, so the fact that I point ...
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: Multiple POV
Multiple POV'S :D I change POV every scene in my story; it's all in third person, but it is all in how the character views and reacts to things. What ...
Mar 30, 2007 -
Re: The Difference Between Landmines and Time Bombs
Hey Shriek! I really enjoyed this. It was written in a very unique way - one I haven't seen much around here- but it was well-written and beautifully done. Your ...
Mar 30, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"If you want to know so badly, why don't you die yourself and then you can tell whoever you want about it." ~Strick (that was not very polite, Strick...) "No, ...
Mar 30, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"I want approval; my goal in life is to achieve confidence." ~Creiha "A life of running is no life at all." ~Strick What is the first thing you see in ...
Mar 30, 2007 -
Re: Horrors of Lecraesa
So, maybe the title isn't completely accurate, but I find it very amusing. Here, I'll be recording some of my progress (and undoubtedly asking for suggestions) in my story: the ...
Mar 30, 2007 -
Re: Black Feather Rising- Beggining of chapter 1
It seems the issue of grammar and such has already been brought up, so I get the fun job of giving you some impressions. I'd like to second all that ...
Mar 30, 2007 -
Re: Flames of Lecraesa: Chapter 2 (A Ruined Courtyard)
Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 This is my shortest chapter, so I'll just post it all on here. Chapter 2: A ...
Mar 30, 2007
