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Marvelous, dahling, marvelous! Delightful to read. Your dialogue is very well done and your description is beautiful. The few things I did notice were pointed out by CL. Luke continued ...

Gah, battle scenes are so hard to write. You are right about the info dumps and action shifts, but I think that problem directly ties into an overall thing I ...

Welcome to YWS! Glad to have you here! You do catch my attention here, and some of your description is good. However, I have a few bones to pick about ...

"I don't trust anything from the 21st century." ~Strick "I am not unnerved by technology. All the guns are worthless anyway." ~Sophie Where do you go when you can't stand ...

On the preface... I like your writing style, but this first part is very, very abrupt. Usually, I don't mind it when writers plunge right into their stories and draw ...

Thanks for reading this, Dark Lordess. :D Chapter 5 won't be up for a while, because I have promised myself I will reach the turning point of the second book ...

*sighs* I want to do 4 books, but if I do, then unless I take a break, I won't be doing Nanowrimo next year. My aim is to finish Tears ...

Hey Night Mistress! Welcome to YWS! I'm Writersdomain (WD) :D Glad to have you on the sight. If you ever any questions or want something of yours reviewed/critiqued, feel free ...

I'll give it a try Strick's Ten Commandments (because he's the easiest. :P ) 1. Thou shalt be strong for those who cannot 2. Thou shalt be selfless for those ...

Quite good! I like your unique description of Syradrum - sounds like a fun place to live. And your development of the characters continues to improve. Telling the Obvious There ...

That's awesome, Meep! You'll have to tell me when it's published! Ghostyverse sounds very interesting!

I'm reading Beka Cooper: Terrier by Tamora Pierce, and I just can't seem to get through it. It's an okay book, but it's not terribly interesting. I can easily put ...

Hey Jig! I really liked your first and second chapters. Your pace is very steady and your writing style shines. Kay is very well developed and I liked your descriptions ...

I listen to all kinds of music while writing: LotR, Anastasia and all sorts of things, though I'm usually listening to my Tears of Lecraesa playlist. I have noticed through ...

Flames and Tears Flames the Tears - the duo of terror. Rewriting parts of Flames has been a nightmare lately. Why? Because when I start from scratch, the characters as ...