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I'd be happy to look at some of your stuff and crit it to the best of my ability. The title is quite intriguing. :wink:

I'm glad you found it helpful! :) Well, name meaning and significance depends on the character. I more meant what the name means to the character and if they have ...

"I don't mind growing old as long as my life is a wonderful one." ~Crisci "Coglia thinks it will be fun to be old!" ~Coglia What is the best advice ...

Hey there! :D I thought I should give a few tips... 1. Dialogue. How does your character say the things they say? Are there pauses? What exact words do they ...

Oooh, fascinating. I really enjoyed this. Much less island-hopping in this section and your characterization improved immensely. Every chapter seems to get better! There were a few grammatical and spe

I have too many foils for my own good. Strick and Criscialda are foils Creiha and Criscialda are foils Strick and Creiha are foils Creiha and Lusien are foils Strick ...

I FINISHED THAT STUPID SOPHIE SCENE! *cheers* Hopefully, things will get easier from here. It didn't turn out too well for Sophie though - she had a heart attack from ...

"My hair is like a tumblweed - you can never control it." ~Gietan "Long, golden and beautiful when I haven't been trudging through mud for days." ~Creiha "Haha, I cut ...

FOIL! Foil characters are the best. What is a foil character? According to Wikipedia, a foil character is "either one who is opposite to the main character or nearly the ...

I love all my characters because of their flaws - even the antagonists who are easy to hate, but it has not hindered me from doing what must be done. ...

Writer's block and perfectionism. *sighs* I know what you mean about going back and rewriting a beginning multiple times, but as writers, sometimes we have to push aside our perfectionist ...

I read Eragon sometime last year, and I didn't absolute hate it, but I didn't think it was that great. I mean, it was a rather mindless thing to read ...

Ooooh, the plot thickens. This is pretty good. Your phrasing and sentence structure is improving immensely! Island-Hopping No, I'm not talking about the Pacific Theater style of battle during World ...

"Collect books like my father. I would do anything to follow in his footsteps." ~Markus "I would go back and live in my hometown, pretending nothing ever happened." ~Crisci What ...

As the nitpicky sentence stuff has already been picked apart by those above, I'll comment on the general flow of the story and the characters. You have a very good ...