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"I lost my innocence the day my brother died." ~Lusie "I never had innocence. Such innocence did not exist in my world." ~Crisci "Innocence. I can't think of a specific ...

Valentine! I like him already. This part was quite good - I liked Sendoma letting go of the power and the werewolf was very interesting. The one thing that kept ...

"I would be fireproof!" ~Strick "If I could have any super power, I would want to have unimaginable strength." ~Sophie In your childhood, what was your greatest dream? Did you ...

You have a very unique writing style. :D I like it. I second Sam's comments - she covered most of what I noticed. So far, the first person seems quite ...

Hey Sean! This was a pretty good start - you had some good characterization of Tyr and Caer and I am very interested to see where this is going. Detail-Dumping ...

Yes! I was very excited to see this posted, not to mention it features the long-awaited return of Myles! Anyways, this was very enjoyable, and Myles is very cool. I ...

I have a few more. :P "Twenty months is like twenty years of waiting for life to begin again and twenty days of old wounds festering." ~Creiha Creiha's views of ...

"She's always be a fairy tale - the saddest fairy tale, the only fairy tale I ever heard, Perhaps we all will be." ~Strick One of my favorite! The theme ...

Chapters in Flames Chapters in Flames... a very humorous topic, actually. Why are Flames chapters so long? Well, you see, Flames was originally written in just a series of scenes ...

Hey Alanna, If you space this correctly (it tells you how in the Before You Post sticky), I would be happy to read over it and give you some suggestions, ...

"I hate loving those who have passed away." ~Strick "I hate loving those who will never return my love." ~Creiha What does love mean to you? Why?

Yup! I've coauthored with some of my friends for fun in the past, and it was a relatively good experience. The two writers I did coauthor with a few years ...

"I've made that mistake many times before, and I would like to believe I would do what is best for everyone in the end." ~Strick "No, I would trust the ...

"When I was eight, my father gave me these little white flowers that I could braid into my hair. I still have them somewhere." ~Lusie What traits (if any) run ...

"Yes, I have killed. I scarcely remember what happened - only staring down at their faces and not being able to move from that place. The first was a boy ...