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Hey there, Mike! This was an interesting bit, and I think Tierna may be important in the future. :) A few things: Time Period Yes, this is in a fantasy ...

Does anyone else find that their favorite character in a book always dies? In almost 90% of all the books I read, my favorite character dies. Sometimes they die early ...

FARAMIR! *cough* This is a great point, Snoink. I think that Frodo had the happier ending, because it you consider how Gollum spent most of his life - wasting away ...

I have a really hard time with those two things too, so I know what you mean. I find that going and back cutting something to its bare bones, then ...

Chapter 5 continued Creiha laughed and pointed to the canopy of tree branches above them, relishing the sunshine on her face and the web-like pattern of shadows cast upon the ...

Hello there! :P On the Prologue: Pile of garbage?! :shock: This is not a pile of garbage. I thoroughly enjoyed this; your style is very beautiful, but in a very ...

Heya! This seems to get better each chapter. I still really like Valentine. :D Grishtog You have done a good job of allowing the reader to feel Grishtog's character; your ...

"Yes. I don't know how to describe it; it all passed so quickly. Nevertheless, I will never forget that day." ~Strick "I kiss my Mommy on the cheek when she ...

The YWS monkey mascot is alive! *hides* I just realized that if you move your mouse over the monkey face near the top of the page, it opens its mouth. ...

*hugs CL* I love you forever! And sorry about the spoilers. :wink: Chapter Length It has come to my attention that the chapters I post here on YWS are very ...

Congrats, Brad!! :D I'll be looking for Chionophobia when it is released.

Quite good, Mike! I enjoyed this chapter immensely. I like Valentine a lot. Your description is much, much better here; I get a very vivid feel for where Sendoma is ...

Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter 5 Chapter 6 Chapter 7 Yes, the long-awaited chapter 5. So, I have not yet reached the turning point of Tears, ...

Hello there Fael. This was an interesting prologue, and I did like your dialogue. I would like to see where this is going. But first, there is something we need ...

Reading Seize the Day by Saul Bellow - I like it so far!