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Very interesting. I am curious to see what Grishtog and Sendoma will do about Makajeh. Because you know how I like Makajeh. :wink: Yay for Magic? I find it very ...

Thanks so much, Dark Lordess! I toyed with that abrupt part a little - not sure if it made it any better, but I gave it a shot. Really appreciate ...

UPDATE: I finished another scene in Tears... hooray! I'm going to try and hold myself to writing two scenes a week, and hopefully I will work up to one scene ...

That's really neat, cheripop! I don't know much about e-books or anything of that sort, but it sounds very cool. Good luck! :D

Yay! I read it. It was quite good, and when you didn't have too much repetition, the description was very good. I thought you had a very good balance of ...

Oooh, I really liked this part. A great plot twist in there (and I was right about it being the Aave! Woot!). Beautifully written here and very emotionally involving. I ...

I liked Lord of the Flies. It is very thought-provoking and worth the read. Read it. :D

"Yes, I often get home-sick, especially of late. Each day I wish that perhaps I could return home, but I know that it is but a wish. I can never ...

Plus, OMGAZ. Strick??? *dies* :lol: Hehehehehe! Anyways, I have a bad habit of finding a favorite character early on (like, the moment I see their name in some occasions), so ...

Sendoma's dream was scary. :shock: This was an interesting bit, and I am curious as to who Garak is. Now we come to the heart of it - the thing ...

Interesting. I second all the comments that have already been given. If you mean this to be the beginning of a story, I think we could use a little more ...

I especially love this one' she made it for me for my birthday. Can you see the words behind the water?

Don't you love obsessed friends? My friend made these nifty backgrounds for me; she's a bit obsessed. :P

Hello there! Your title intrigued me - I couldn't help but to come and read this. :wink: So, this was quite good. I like your writing style - it is ...

This is quite good, Elein! Very mysterious. I enjoyed it immensely. DarkLight found most of the nitpicky things I noticed, but I'll point out just a few... Iolayne flipped the ...