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I never do plan what I intendt to just fits, more or less, as it goes. Heh, yes, I can relate except I never end up writing exactly what I ...

6/10 Those are some shiny teeth you have there. :wink:

7/10 Two against an entire castle? Easy win, of course. Attacking with one, on the other hand, is absolutely inconceivable. :wink:

Well, I'm not going to go into a in-depth critique or anything considering this is in Writer's Corner, but I'd be happy to give you some impressions.. -I don't know ...

:) I don't feel the mood swing was overdone, but rather that it could have used a bit more description to make it a bit less abrupt. See ya around!

"The day I first met King Hedjlon. My memory fails me about what happened, but somehow I know that whatever happened, it was terrible." ~Strick "Probably the day Senzieda died. ...

But-but I love the semicolon! :cry: Good points, Crysi! :D Semicolon overkill can be very painful to read. And please don't make a habit of strangling editors quite yet. :P

:wink: All eyes turned to Rais, who was standing three steps behind lady Ainathy, just as stony-faced as always. He did not comment on the fact that all it took ...

On to the second part! Torn away from the world of myths and legends, he nodded back at the statue of Leara the Forgiving she? Slowly, Aine made her way ...

I thinks this belongs in Writer's Corner. :wink: *moved*

I have a few concerns about my writing up to this chapter, so if anyone could help me with this, it would be much appreciated. :) 1. I feel like ...

On the first part, I'm going to do a brief nitpick... “Aine? Lady Aine!” Rais knocked on the door a bit harder than it (you can omit 'it' here) was ...

Oy, quite good, Elein! I really liked the dialogue between Sevirard and Serena - fun. The only thing I would suggest is focusing a bit more on the other soldiers's ...

"Well, I'd rather not have either, but if I had to choose, probably a stomach ache. I've had more than my share of headaches lately." ~Strick "Definitely a headache. Stomach ...

I usually type. I'll handwrite something if it comes to me at school, but my handwriting is very strange - it's very small and has a weird, cursive tilt to ...