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Thanks for the advice and encouragement, everyone. It is much appreciated. :D I posted a pronunciation guide here (you have to scroll down a bit, I think)

As has been said, your writing is smooth and this is a fantastic start to a story; however, there are a few things I think you can improve upon a ...

Hey Eloquence! I apologize that it took so long for someone to review your story; I saw it all alone down here and couldn't resist. This story is extremely hard ...

Pronunciation Guide Due to popular demand... a name/place pronunciation guide for Flames of Lecraesa (I don't know the standard way to write pronunciations, but think you'll understand...) FIRST NAMES

I try to critique once a day, and, like Claudette, there are some days when I'll critique 3 or 4 pieces or more. Lately, school has been interfering, but I ...

Hmmm, very interesting. Your description of her falling was wonderful - unique and refreshing in its own sense. I commend you for that. Adjectives Adjectives. What do I have to ...

The sound of guns ripping through the Cutlass startled Hope from where she sat half-asleep below deck; blinking a few times to ward off sleep, it took a few moments ...

I think writing extensively about a character in the sections of a profile that do apply is most beneficial. I know that Character Skeletons and Conflict Charts (and a writing ...

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I haven't done one of these in a very, very long time, but I will definitely give this a try. :wink: Name: Hope DeGoriel Age: 21 Position: a young artisan ...

Hello, Anja, and welcome to YWS. I know you're new, but please don't post so many message begging for reviewers. It clutters the forum and turns many potential readers away. ...

I love chapter names, but I never add them in until I've written the entire story. That way I can look back and view the chapter in the context of ...

Hehe, yes, character impressions. (I love you, Imp!!!) Sentence structure, spelling, grammar, phrasing, wordiness - all these I can fix with a few suggestions and a couple readthroughs. Characters, on

I'm not a pro at this stuff, but here are a few things that have helped me in the past... 1. Take it one or two lines at a time. ...

I finished Seize the Day by Saul Bellow. It wasn't very long, but it was extremely thick themewise and took me a long time to get through. Very uneventful, but ...