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Eeep! I wrote a review of this last night, but then my internet crashed. *stabs computer* Ah well, I'll try to rewrite it. Yay! I finally got to read something ...

Eeep! I wrote a review of this last night, but then my internet crashed. *stabs computer* Ah well, I'll try to rewrite it. Yay! I finally got to read something ...

UPDATE! Tears: I reached the turning point. :D Excerpt: He cleared his throat. Setting his jaw in determination, Larckes stared down at the figure and announced in a deep voice. ...

Hey there! I'll be your critiquing partner! :D And the names of your races are very interesting (and easy to pronounce! :)) Ah, races, what fun. I don't have anything ...

In the love romantic sense, I can't say I am. While I love writing love stories, I don't read a lot of romance novels or watch many of those movies, ...

It was originally in Action/Adventure Fiction. I moved it to Writer's Corner and PMed the author about it. He told me it was the beginning of a storybook, so if ...

"My middle name is Iduali which means "Honesty". Strangely, enough, my intials spell LIE." ~Liehne :P Are there any types of people you simply cannot tolerate?

Music - I am in love with music, especially piano and percussion and clarinet. I also love drawing (though I am quite awful), history and psychology. Tis fascinating.

I think I have read too much Shakespeare lately. And I have found my new favorite quote: "Are you blind, Gietan? Whatever I adore I manage to spurn. Whatever I ...

*moved to Writer's Corner for the time being*

This is a decent start. As Ofour said, there isn't much to critique here and that is the reason why it seems to lead nowhere. You have introduced no conflict, ...

While I didn't care for Eragon and I disliked Eldest , I will read the third book. I can never leave a trilogy at the second book. :P

*cheers* Hugs for both of you, Jenna and Claudette!

I read the edited version of your prologue and it is much, much better. The only other suggestion I can give without being incredibly nitpicky is to clarify that Naera/Sarah ...

Indeed, much better. It no longer seemed rushed and you did an excellent job of adding more detail so it sounded like more than spouting off information. You added a ...