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I admire anyone who can successfully redraft an entire piece of writing. I know that I would fail miserably. :shock:

Hey all! These are the first few paragraphs of Tears of Lecraesa, the sequel to Flames of Lecraesa which I am working on now. These paragraphs are purely figurative, so ...

Hey there, Raine! I'm WD and welcome to YWS! Everyone around here is very willing to help out so feel free to PM me or anybody else if you have ...

Wel, I have not read the previous parts, but after this, I want to. You have some excellent dialogue here and it seems like a good start. The one suggestion ...

You're off to a good start, Night Mistress! You have begun to introduce us to Rosaline and her family, begun to develop her and allowed her to speak for herself. ...

Hey there, Winie! Much better spelling here, hon. Thank you. :D There were still a few errors, but it wasn't as bad. Here's what I'll do. I'm going to go ...

Hey there, FantasyArtist! Mmm, this was enjoyable to read. I like that it was told from the POV of a wolf and I like Elayna already. I have but a ...

Interesting. I still love your style - it's so beautiful and you have paid much attention to detail here, which makes me very happy. :wink: Laynox and Akkarn are coming ...

Hello there, Magyk! This was a joy to read. Your imagery of the storm sucked me in immediately which is exactly what it should do, and I loved how you ...

Hey DefJam! :D Sure looks interesting, but it's a little hard to find and read on Live Journal. I'm sure that if you pasted it into a thread and posted ...

Hey Night Mistress! I saw some of your help topics around and decided to come take a look. First, I thought this should be rated R for sexual content (we ...

Ah, spelling! *flails* You're killing me here with your spelling errors. I don't mean to sound harsh, but no one is going to take you seriously if you don't spell ...

Hey there! So I got around to this sooner than expected. :P Whenever I get a request for a crit, I always print the piece out and make comments there, ...

I love the word stricken too. :wink:

I cannot thank you enough, Cal. ^_^ You gotta love those dead men. I feel the need to rant. Writing Tears today I realized how extremely helpful telling yourself the ...