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Hey there, Cal! This was a joy to read. You captured the mood beautifully and I adore your style. Very intriguing. Only a few comments: Fred Maitland followed the shrill ...

Hey DragonWriter! :) Every writer has a part of their writing that they know they need work on. I understand it can be discouraging to be judged on those flaws, ...

Hello, Heaven Sent! ^_^ I liked this bit; it carried the action well and I liked the slow, patient pace. There were a lot of awkward sentences that I noticed ...

Mmm, very interesting. I like your writing style - very simple, yet beautiful. You have an excellent start; it just needs a bit of polishing. :wink: Some suggestions: Danica Holden ...

Hello there, Achitaka! Seeing you have no comments yet, I thought I would stop by. This is a decent beginning in the sense that you have specific direction in which ...

Some good ideas. ^_^ While I don't think I could ever create a short story in those simple steps, but it's a good basic outline, and I'm sure it would ...

SPELLING! *attacks* Please spell correctly. As the grammatical things have already been covered, I will give you some tips on the overall story. :wink: While this was a decent start, ...

Hmmmm, interesting beginning. I echo a lot of Claudette's comments, as usual. :wink: I apologize in advance if I am being harsh, because I really don't like this kind of ...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! *hugs both and throws confetti*

I thought it was a very good movie. While rather complicated at times and a bit hard to follow, the acting and the main story was intriguing. I loved the ...

I have a feeling that a good chunk of this is not to be taken literally, but I am not sure. It was a little strange, how the narrative went ...

Thanks so much, Jack. I really needed to hear that; I easily lapse into excessive adjectives until someone knocks me on the head and tells me to cut down. ^_^ ...

*blushes* Thank you. Eeep, thanks for pointing out the rose vs. flower thing, McMourning. I never noticed that before. The flowers allude to the prologue of the first book, Flames ...

Ooooh, I liked this very much. Your characterization of Jacques Ambler (I presume that is the main character's name) was excellent and it immediately hooked me. Excellent description over all. ...

"Inanity is meaningless, of course. Any person who can live in inanity is truly blessed." ~Strick "I hate inanity; it makes me restless." ~Markus What is your favorite controversial topic ...