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Hey there the weeping figs! Welcome to YWS! I'm WD and it's wonderful to meet you! I think it's really nifty that you are two are a writing duo; I ...

Hey there LuckyStar! Welcome to YWS! :D I'm happy you found your way to this wonderful site, and I think you will like it here a lot! I'm WD, and ...

Do I sense a scriptwriter in the making? :wink: Welcome to YWS, Butterpants! We're so glad that you found your way to this great site! I'm WD, and it's a ...

Hey Phaix! Glad to see you have edited this! It is already reading much better, without those over-the-top sections I pointed out! The emotion already seems much more natural and ...

I moved it to Action/Adventure Novels for you! Feel free to contact any of us if you need anything else. ^^

Hey there Phaix! I'm WD, and I'm going to be your reviewer today! This is a nice little piece--I like the unanswered questions. It feels like the beginning of something ...

The advice that has been given already is great! As has been said, the best way to fix this is to practice. I struggled with this for a very long ...

Don't worry about the genre right now! Write the story, and see what happens. Sometimes stories evolve on their own, and you'll have a better idea of where to place ...

Hey there aidyl! First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm WD, and it's lovely to meet you! Anyways, I'll get on to the story. :) You have a really great ...

Having the character who is being 'possessed' experience a deep anxiety or dissatisfaction with his own feelings or actions might also point to a force beyond his control influencing him. ...

Go for it! I have not done that challenge specifically, but crazy writing sprees are far too much fun. If I were to give any advice, it would just be ...

Happy Birthday, Nate!!

Welcome to YWS! :D Nice to meet you! I'm WD. *tips top hat* And glittering pony unicorns are fantastic. Anyways, I hope you're having a good time on here so ...

Welcome to YWS! =D I'm WD and it's great to meet you! I hope you're enjoying it here so far! And daydreaming is great--I think that's a healthy imagination right ...

Hey there JackpotJohnson! I'm WD and it's lovely to meet you. ^^ You have some interesting ideas here, and I think this could go somewhere, but it seems to be ...