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Hello there, ShadowStalker This has lots of potential and your writing style is very promising. I second everything that Imp said. The first attempt at this subject i made, I ...

Okay, so I couldn't keep away. :P I love the detail in this - it's simply wonderful and it flows so naturally. The ambulance lights painted a bloody collage on ...

Finally got to this! :D It was a pleasure to read; I love your writing style. It is so detailed, yet not overboard. I just have a few little nitpicks: ...

I can't single out one favorite book, but some of my favorites are: The Silver Hand by Stephen Lawhead, The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald, Assassin's Apprentice by Robin ...

Hello there, DragonWriter. ^_^ The pace was much better in this; it did not seem as rushed in regards to pace, and your introspection into Alberic boosted your characterization - ...

6/10 I suppose I don't really understand it, but in conjunction with your avatar, it's neat. :P

"If it's not night, I look for some kind of lantern or window to let in some light. If it's nighttime, darkness is expected, so I go outside." ~Strick "I ...

Today was very taxing. After a week of no writing during finals, I wrote about 15 pages today. I definitely bit off too big of a chunk of material in ...

KAVOR, please PM The Box if you want him to look at your story; this really isn't the place to make a request. :wink: On to the story... Hello there, ...

Hey Wiggy! This was a joy to read! The imagery in here was lovely, and I am awed by the way you conveyed your character's emotions. Unlike those above, I ...

Thank you so much, Dark Lordess. ^_^ Critique is appreciated. I am very concerned about the pace of the action in this chapter, and before I start rewriting chapter 8, ...

I understand what you mean, but by asking you to show and not tell, I am by no means asking you to include action in the beginning. I am just ...

I don't agree with number one. If you're constantly waiting on the muse, you're not gonna get far. My thoughts completely. Muses are too unpredictable to depend upon. While there ...

I read the first few books of that series. While I liked the writing and found the plot interesting, after a while, there were so many characters I was completely ...

Yay! You edited! This was a decent start. I like the name Moonshine, and you have potential, but a lot of the things that I mentioned in The Dragon apply ...