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Oooh, very enjoyable. I adore your style - it seems simple, but at the same time, it shows so much to the reader. Beautiful. I had not sylistic qualms about ...

Hello there, Lora! :D So, I have not critiqued poetry in a long time, but I'm trying to get back into it. In essence, you're my guinea pig. :P Imagery ...

I thank you both profusely (can't get out of old English can I) Haha, old English is awesome. Anyway, great job editing it. It looks much better already. The ending ...

Brilliant - I love the spatulas. :wink:

Hi there, Betty! Welcome to YWS! :D I'm WD, and I hope you enjoy it here. There's a welcome section where you can introduce yourself and meet people under Community ...

I haven't read (or critiqued for that matter) poetry for a long, long time, but after reading this, I think I might have to sneak back into the poetry forums. ...

Hey there, Lilith! Mmm, interesting. On a first readthrough, it seemed like you have the pace and characterization down (though I'll touch on some suggestions later); therefore, I'm going to ...

*eats critique* I love you, Snoink! Off to edit!

I'm just beginning Rise to Rebellion by Jeff Shaara. :P

Ooh, me likes it. :wink: Callisto was developed very well, even in the short time she had. The writing flowed smoothly and your word choice was, as always, superb. There ...

The second one looks most interesting to me... then, of course, I love fire, so that might have something to do with it.

Beautifully written, Crysi! I love your characters and their reactions to each other. I enjoyed it immensely. I thought your paragraphs were a little odd at times, and that some ...

The following is the last chapter of Flames of Lecraesa which I have been worried over lately. It does not require too much explanation, and, even if you have not ...

Oooh, a fight. I'm horrid at writing these sorts of things, but this was quite good. Very specific, but not overly telling or confusing. I have but a few suggestions: ...

Hello, I'm Strick... [after being prodded with a stick by author numerous times] And I don't like fire and I don't like talking about myself. If you must dabble in ...