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Re: Color My World- 1
*rated R for language* (one mention of F word = R :wink:) Hey JCobsesed! I loved your voice in this piece; it was very unique and biting. I usually don't ...
Jun 17, 2007 -
Re: finishing stories
Simple Solution: Keep writing Discipline and perseverance - two key traits of a writer. Don't stop to edit; what matters is finishing. After you have finished, you will have a ...
Jun 17, 2007 -
Re: Romanticness
Hello, there, author! I like your writing style - it flows beautifully, and your characters have very natural dialogue. It is very hard to critique excerpts from large pieces of ...
Jun 16, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"Colors in general? Well, obviously something that is color less is empty. But something that is especially color ful is obnoxious." ~Strick "Unlike my friend, I am not going to ...
Jun 16, 2007 -
Re: Linda's Life
Welcome to YWS, Linda! Hi there, I'm WD. ^_^ You play soccer? Sweet. I used to play soccer, but I stopped in high school. Soccer rocks! Anyways, I hope to ...
Jun 16, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
"... Lusien." ~Strick "That's an awfully hard question, you know. There are so many people I would want to save. I would probably never be able to decide and just ...
Jun 16, 2007 -
Re: No Excuses; No Stopping
I love Fitzgerald!!! :P
Jun 16, 2007 -
Re: No Excuses; No Stopping
No Excuses; No Stopping Most writers are perfectionists, and, because of this, writers are often unsatisfied or overly critical of their work. They sometimes respond negatively or are discourage by ...
Jun 16, 2007 -
Re: Vampire: Of Roses And Daggers
*rated R for language* (one mention of the F word indicates R)
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 17
*rated R for sexual content*
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Hello. I'm...
Welcome to YWS, Jarannis! Favorite genre is fantasy? Cool - stop by the fantasy fiction forums and take a look at some stuff; I'm always lurking there so I will ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: I can't get attached to my characters!
Being attached is necessarily vital , but without being attached, it can be hard to develop your characters enough. The best advice I can give for getting attached to characters ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Dear 13-year-old: YOU SUCK!
Great tips, Snoink! ^_^ I agree about age for the most part, but, like Imelda brought up, there are always exceptions (young writers who are serious and older writers who ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Eeeep, help!
I'm stumped. So, for the next scene of my story I need to get two characters alone - Nalien and Liehne (with possibly another character- Sophie). Problem is that Nalien ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Goodnight...
Good night, my lovely can opener. No matter how many times I have tried, I can never seem to figure out how you are used. Have a good night, for ...
Jun 14, 2007
