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Hey Elein! I'm glad I finally got to this; it was a joy to read. Aside from all the typos, your writing style was great and, though the number of ...

Goodness, it has been forever since I posted a poem. I apologize in advance; it has been a long time. Too High to Land Green shadows fly high above the ...

I echo Claudette. You made an effort at painting a scene in the reader's mind to help convey your theme, but it still needs some work. Imagery is the most ...

UPDATE: Current Tears word count: 124, 593 It's going rather well. The characters are beginning to cooperate. Coglia's presence is smoothing over some heavy tensions, and Liehne is starting to ...

I feel rather out of place seeing all the above responses, but oh well. ^_^ My favorite type of music is definitely instrumental, soundtrack music. It is my primary inspiration ...

"Fear." ~Strick "Well, I may shake if it is cold, obviously. Fear makes me shake. Death makes me shake. Sorrow and disgust shake me. Pity shakes me. I shake in ...

I loved Stranger than Fiction! :P And I could partially relate to her the author's distress in killing her character.

Heh, I'm guilty of the dogearing thing, but it does bug me when people mark in the books. The sight of clean, fresh pages is a feast to my eyes ...

Like Claudette said, my time is usually taken up by one or the other while I am writing. It is true that I tend to read less while writing (partly ...

WD, I just recalled one inner critique complaint I have!!! And what might that be, hon?

On Marriage What age is a reasonable age for marriage? Hard question. I'd say around twenty three What events would have to happen before you would consider marriage? I would ...

Thanks, Poltergiest and Roya! Yeah, I love how short it is. ^_^ It's fitting for the end. And it's fine that you don't know what the beads mean. I think ...

Thanks you so much for the tips everyone! :D It is much appreciated. *hugs everybody* I finally finished the scene. Sophie threatened Nalien into talking to Liehne because she was ...

The only way I finished stories was I got completely obsessed with them. I echo Snoink. Being emotionally engaged in a story (to an obsessive degree) is very important for ...

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