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Re: Awakening Ch.1
I second everything Claudette said, especially about the first chapter. I'm not going to reiterate everything she said, but I will give you some suggestions in the introduction. Obviously, Fawn ...
Jun 23, 2007 -
Re: Hey Guys
Welcome to YWS, Oshmiester! I'm WD, and I'm very glad you joined. Is that a quote at the beginning of your post? It's very neat. Anyways, I hope you like ...
Jun 23, 2007 -
Re: Excerpt from Tears of Lecraesa- impressions?
*hugs everybody* Thank you so much for the lovely comments! SeraphTree >> Oooh, danke, lovely song. I suppose it sort of fits. :wink: Never heard it before, but it looks ...
Jun 23, 2007 -
Re: Excerpt from Tears of Lecraesa- impressions?
Thanks for the suggestion, SeraphTree (even though I think you just made Strick scared of mirrors... :wink: ) For example, he wants to save her, but he can't because of ...
Jun 20, 2007 -
Re: The Yerrida
It sounds very cool! (and I like the names. :P ) Will you be posting any more on YWS?
Jun 20, 2007 -
Re: i'm new...
Hi! :D Welcome to YWS! I'm very glad you joined, and I can't wait to see some of your writing. I'm WD, and if you have any questions, want a ...
Jun 20, 2007 -
Re: Excerpt from Tears of Lecraesa- impressions?
Even if you have not read Flames of any of Tears, I would really value some impressions on this! So, I wrote this scene yesterday (I think; I don't know ...
Jun 20, 2007 -
Re: To describe or not to describe; that is the question.
It really depends on the character. I often give the reader a vague sense of my character's appearance (unless something about the character's appearance is significant in which case I ...
Jun 20, 2007 -
Re: A Little Whimsical in the Brain Pan
Oooh, fun indeed! I like Regan. *cheers* And the relationship between Regan and Henry seems to be an interesting one. :P
Jun 20, 2007 -
Re: Spiderman 3
My Harry should not have died. Period. :cry:
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: ZOHMIGOSH JACK!
Cannibalized?? :wink: HA PPY BIRT HDAY , JACK! Confetti and hugs for you!
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: What's Your Religion?
I'm a Christian, though I don't like to identify myself with any denomination. It gets confusing; my Christian beliefs are my own and I believe them with all my heart. ...
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
9/10 Haha, purple nails are awesome! :P
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: The Singer ch.2
Hey there, Twinflower! Mmm, this was very enjoyable. I love the names of your characters. :D Your pace is nice, and the characterization is coming along. Great bit of writing ...
Jun 19, 2007 -
Re: The Yerrida - Before the Laori snatch her off
^_^ I'm glad I could help. When you get around to editing this, PM me because I would love to read the edited version.
Jun 18, 2007