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SPEW saves kittens, but SPEW does not exist.

That wasn't very nice. :( You hurt the kittens! *readies explosives*

I love titles! Usually, my titles don't make sense until you near the end and usually they are more symbolic than anything. I'm not sure why, but base titles that ...

Hee hee I used to think torture was the only want to create conflict and some of my old, old characters are messed up to an unbelievable degree. I don't ...

Oh, I love SPEW too What ever would I do If they took away my SPEW? :roll: SPEW: SPEWing critiques across YWS, saving kittens one crit at a time. You ...

Epilogues? While laboring over certain, evil scenes in Tears, I've been thinking about writing an epilogue for Flames. Both Flames and Tears are narrated by King Lucien - king of ...

Duff - Will NOT, leave me alone under any circumstances Haha, I feel your pain more than you know. At least the scenes are still coming to you even though ...

Like Claudette said, you really need to post more of this. Also, this seemed like a repetition of the prologue; you were saying a very similar thing, just giving us ...

I agree with those above. It was a - well - interesting idea, but it was too wordy. When something is too wordy, it means that the amount of words ...

"Not always." ~Strick "Usually, age and wisdom do go hand in hand, but there are a few glaring exceptions in my mind, which cannot be ignored." ~Markus "I do believe ...

An interesting concept here, though I do not fully understand it. Like others, I was irked by the uniform sentence structure. Variety is your friend. A few technical things... She ...

:shock: Claudette, dear, I think you need to cut down on the cannibalism. It was a cute poem, nevertheless. The rhyming seemed a bit forced at times, but it was ...

10/10 Face/Palm - I can relate completely. :P

Hello Twinflower! I enjoyed this immensely. Your writing is as vibrant as ever, and your pace is great. Not rushed at all, yet not dragging either - perfect. Your description ...

Hey there, JC! I'm glad I got around to reading this. I still love the voice, and your story is developing nicely. Truly wonderful. Only a few things... Melodramatic thinking, ...