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Contractions A contraction refers to the condensing of words as they evolve through a language. They are often times easy to identify in literature and writing; however, there are some ...

Character Development Workshop: The Active Modes of Development You may have heard it said that characters are the single most powerful magnetic force that draws a reader in. People are ...

Character Development Workshop: Unlocking Your Characters Ever had a character who just won't open up? Ever had a character who defied character development because of it? Then this is for ...

Hey there Zephy! Tis WD, here as requested to review your piece. ^_^ Because a lot of my comments are sentence-level and you requested this review, I'll take this paragraph ...

Sounds like you have some great character names so far. :wink: Names that come to mind from your description: Hayden (eh, maybe a little too close?), Haman (you also get ...

Hello angels_symphony! I'm WD and I'm glad you mentioned desiring more reviews on this piece. All in all, you have a very beautiful writing style. Your descriptions are unique and ...

Writer's block is nasty. I sympathize. :wink: In addition to some of the grand suggestions here, read a good book. Either something you have already read and love or something ...

Hello joshuapaul! This is WD and I'm glad I finally got around to this. I apologize for it taking so long. When I get requests, I like to read the ...

Hello JRS, I'm WD and this beginning to your story intrigued me. You have a lot of good ideas here and I'm here to give you a few suggestions and ...

Hey infinite reality! As I have said before, I am fond of your writing style; however, I'm very confused. I'll color coordinate the paragraphs based on the pov its in. ...

Your Style Your style is the way you sound. Writing style is a slippery, crazy term that we writers throw around when we either like or dislike the way a ...

Hello there infinite reality. Glad to see a continuation of this story up. To me, this was a marvelous continuation of your prologue; the contrast between the prologue and this ...

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Hello Belzer! I'm WD, nice to meet you. :) You have some interesting characters that you introduce in this bit and I'm quite fond of the initial impressions I have ...

Hello there Stella! I'm WD, and it's nice to meet you. This is a lovely beginning you have here; your writing style thus far is charming in its simplicity. You ...