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It's Thanksgiving! Happy Thanksgiving, everybody! I'm thankful for my family for the rain for computers for flowers for fall for winter on its way for YWS for great people for ...

Develop your characters. :wink: Might sound silly, but the characters in Twilight are, in my opinion, largely flat and archetypal. If you put the effort into developing your characters, they ...

Hey there Kamas! So... I do believe I have warned you that I have not reviewed poetry in a very long time, but, at your request, I am glad to ...

Hey there joshuapaul! Tis WD again. Glad to see you're dabbling in some new genres. :wink: As has been said, you write very well. You have a very good grasp ...

Hey there StrayRebel! Welcome to YWS! I'm WD, lovely to meet you. I am so glad to hear that your novel is going well and I'm thrilled to see another ...

Hey TigerShaard! This is WD. This is an interesting story; by the title, it seems to suggest fantastical elements, but you seems to deliberately include details that ground the reader ...

You already have some great advice here, but I would like to emphasize working with the character's voices. I think having one person go and talk to each of them ...

I don't think either of these extremes is necessarily healthy for a character, but, as has been said, I tend to prefer flaws to no flaws. And the Anti-Sue approach ...

I will head the initial bombardment. *salutes* Preparing to strike with a slew of kittens and elephant emoticon grenades. :elephant: :elephant:

Happy Birthday YWS! *throws confetti* :elephant: Glad to be here for the 5th birthday of this site which means so much to me. Thank you, Nate, for 5 years of ...

Hey there TheWriters! I'm WD and first, I would like to welcome you to YWS! Glad to see a new face in this section. This was an interesting idea, you ...

Hey there napalmerski! I'm WD and I enjoyed reading this story. The ideas you have here are intriguing. You did a lovely job of setting up your world and I, ...

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It's wonderful, Nate. :) Like the new look. Thank you so much!

Hey Jig! A very lovely piece you have here. Your style is refreshing and most of your word choice fit perfectly. I am quite fond of your style. This was ...