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Re: Detailed Descriptions
The key to description is detail; you have nothing to describe if you don't have any idea of the details in your setting. Details like what the stairs look like, ...
Dec 11, 2009 -
Re: POV...How do you change it? (Argh! Help!)
First of all, are you going to tell it from omniscient POV or from limited just with different characters you get into the heads of (as in, switching who you ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: Missing Link
Hey there Kate! Tis WD! You have an interesting piece here and I think it has some potential, but there are a few things I think you can do to ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: An Excerpt from Shrive
Okay, so this is an excerpt in Shrive that I would really love some help revising. This is a scene in which I experimented with narration deterioration, which means my ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: A howl in darkness (Prologue)
Hey there pandacary! Welcome to YWS! I'm WD and it's lovely to meet you. I just wanted to give you a few pointers on some of the things that have ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: What is a sentence fragment?
A special liking of sentence fragments. That is, I have a special liking of sentence fragments. :wink:
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Two Quick Updates (Dec. 6 2009)
Love the changes on the front page, Nate!
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
The end of this year on YWS was simply marvelous. :) I disappeared from YWS sometime last year, if I remember correctly, overwhelmed with life and choosing colleges, and when ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Featured Member December 2009: Kamas
Congratulations, Kamas! :elephant:
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Bond: You look so lovely! Classy: Love the nerd outfit. ^_^ Also lovely Silented/Loud: You can smile! You must smile more often; it befits you. :wink: Sureal: Oh my goodness, ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: YWS Secret Santa (closed)
Oh my goodnesseth, I am definitely doing this! :D Wonderful idea! Favorite colors: purple, gray, blue Favorite Genre: Fantasy Fiction and Historical Fiction. However, I have a mortal weakness for ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Most likely a few bad ideas, but I'm not the best judge
Hey there pinkangel! The first idea, Not, is definitely an interesting one. It sounds tricky to do, as you would have to have a very good idea of what these ...
Dec 4, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
9/10 Great quotes! :wink:
Dec 4, 2009 -
Re: The Reduced Shakespeare Company
Oh goodness! I just discovered this yesterday! The Reduced Shakespeare Company performs Shakespeare's plays in a very... unique way. :shock: Poor Shakespeare. :lol: The Othello Rap Macbeth Enjoya!
Dec 4, 2009 -
Re: Favorite Chinese Food
Now I am seriously craving Chinese food. :cry: I like getting takeout Chinese. And I like egg rolls! Yum, yum, YUM!!! There's this Chinese place in the food court here ...
Dec 4, 2009