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I generally don't like to give a brief summary of my character's appearance all in one block, but it's not necessarily a bad thing. I tend to integrate the physical ...

Hey Rosey! I'm so glad I got to take a look at this; it's a really interesting first chapter and I'm already curious about your characters and how the story ...

Hey Jiggity! Got around to this at last! :wink: Very cool piece you have here. As has been mentioned, I love the beginning; the way you introduce the magician is ...

Hey Lena! It's WD, here as promised. :D Lena, you are a wonderful writer. I didn't feel that it was too disorganized at all. The flashes back and forth in ...

Hey there hon! :D I'm so glad you posted another excerpt of this! The more I read of Dream Catcher, the more I want to see! I thought this was ...

Hey! Thanks for the comments everyone! I really appreciate all of your impressions and suggestions. Thank you! Just to clear a few questions up. :wink: Regarding the logistics of the ...

Hey foxfire! I'm back to look at your edited version. Some marvelous improvement--you have a lot more character here and it is already helping to draw us into the story. ...

This is an absolutely wonderful tip! :wink: Editing out those mistakes you can catch on your own opens up the opportunity for other writers to catch things you couldn't have ...

Hi TemptedFiction! Welcome to YWS! So glad to see your new smiling face! :D Haha, I have issues with unnecessary dialogue as well, so if you need someone to sympathize ...

10/10 That is beau-tiful though rather creepy. A lovely mix. :wink:

Hey there Kate! I finally got around to this! This was an interesting carrying of the action; you're doing a good job of not making Rose too explosive here. I'm ...

Hey Kate! First, I just want to say this is a marvelous improvement from your first draft. There was a much better sense of Rose and her personality, and the ...

Hey Tiger! This is an interesting start to a story. You have some interesting concepts and a few brilliant lines. I just have a few suggestions for when you get ...

Hey there foxfire! I'm WD, pleased to meet you. :wink: You have an interesting start here, and I'd like to see where this story goes, but I'd like to address ...

Hey Sachi! This is really very lovely. :D You have a simplistic but beautiful style and it works magic in this story. Despite the reliance on dialogue, you have a ...