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Re: Characters anything but average-looking
I am mostly in agreement. :wink: Characters do not have to possess remarkable beauty or stunning defining qualities to stand out and, while I would never condemn every character with ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Hooves and Heels
Mell woke to an irregularly shaped rock jutting into her back, a grimace twisting her face as she slowly sat up and reached out for her quiver instinctively, jerking her ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Hooves and Heels
Okie dokies. Joining now. :oops: Full Name: Mell Rean Gender: Female Age: 24 Birthplace: City of Kell Race: Human Eye Color: Gray Height: 5'2 Weight: 112 Appearance: Mell has gray ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: The River That Weeps (Edited and refurbished!)
Hey there Olli! Great to see you around and posting! Tis WD! So, I really like your title--it is what initially drew me in, so nice job with that! You ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: WD's Reviews
Done, m'dear!
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Small Steps
Hey there flute! Tis WD, as requested! :wink: So, I thought this was pretty nice! I liked the simple style you used here and many of your sentences struck close ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: YWS Reviewing Sunday
Huzzah! *throws confetti*
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: sci-fi story feedback needed
Hey there teevee! Tis WD, here to review for you! So, I enjoyed reading this. You have a very distinct writing style that I enjoy. You seem to have a ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Heaven and Hell (not fixed title)
Hey there Carly! Tis WD! I'm glad I got to read this. This beginning has a lot of potential. As has been mentioned, the girl out in the hallway really ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: WD's Reviews
Done! :wink:
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Removed
Hey there, Elinor! Tis WD, as requested! Anyways, first, I'd like to say that I like the name Dinah. It's pretty, and you have some good ideas flowing here. You ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Greetings Young Writers!
Welcome to YWS, inkwell! I'm WD and it's wonderful to meet you! I'm glad you stumbled upon this great community of writers. ^^ What do you like to write? Any ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Hey everyone! :)
Welcome to YWS, Darien! I'm WD and it's fantastic to meet you! How are you doing? I'm so happy you've found your way to this website and I'm sure you ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Hello, and how may I help you?
Welcome to YWS, Lavender! How are you? I'm WD and it's a pleasure to meet you! Ack, writer's block--you will find many discussions dedicated to bemoaning that plague. :wink: But ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Jokes should be taken seriously
Welcome to YWS! I'm WD, tis lovely to meet you! You say you are writing a book about vampires who do not sparkle? :P What has been your favorite part ...
Jan 28, 2010