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Thanks for the honesty and suggestions Incandescence. I appreciate it

you're a masterpiece if you can call it that anymore after swarms of followers crowd you from me and all i can see is painful camera flashes but small snapshots ...

You want to speak the truth,But you won't,Why? Are afraid of what other people will say and thik of you? But you say you don't care about what other people ...

Thanks for your reply, Monkey, but I was wondering if you could point hte subplot out to me. That would help me revise it. Gracias

There we are. I cut it a little. Is that better, Firestarter?

To feel one’s pain; to feel one’s joy To know one’s heart Not the facades they deploy To love one even in their filth And forgive them when their control ...

I think this really has the potential to be good and I did like it... a lot, but it could use some work Lost I lost a friend today Of ...

I didn't really think it was that great, but it could be with some work. Why can’t we spend sentimental summers, Surfing and smiling and enjoying life? Ok, I liked ...

That was really good. Some of them spelling and punctuation bugged me, but it didn't take away from the meaning. I absolute loved your ending. It was neat and definitley ...

I fixed that 'heaven' thing for you, Firestarter. Thanks to everyone

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe hated pickles so ...

The water ripples in webs of beauty Intricate, weaving through the glassy surface The storm clouds breach to reveal wonder Illuminating the land of darkness below the heavens The tornadoes ...

That was okay, I guess. To me, it didn't really have any major meaning and didn't really move me or make me think. It was hard to tell what aspect ...

I thought this was very good. I love how you use your similes and adjectives. It makes your writing very unique. Soem of the irregular line breaks made it a ...

Thank you very much for your suggestions/criticism everyone. They mean a lot to me. Yeah, this is a revised version of a poem I wrote a long time ago so ...