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Yes, Tamora Pierce's Trickster books were beautiful. I didn't like the second one as much as the first one, but it was still good. My favorite character was Fesgao.

Bobo: How do simple member not count? Are they not part of the body as well?

All right, I revised it attempting to use all your suggestions, though it was impossible to use all of them.

areida07: I absolute LOVE Gilbert Morris and Francine Rivers! If you like them, try Angela Elwell Hunt. She is so awesome.

This was okay. Here's some suggestions: Always keep your memories, Of the good times, and the bad. But most of all think happy thoughts, About the good times we have ...

*smiles* If you were going to irony, it most certainly worked! Another good job to you...

I thought this was really well done. Here's a few suggestions... candles, burning, hot wax, melting, small fingers, can i kiss you again? You did a really nice job using ...

Thank you so much, guys!!!! This is probably the most feedback I've gotten on a poem and I really, really, REALLY appreciate it!!! Thanks for pointing out that part about ...

I thought this was really cool and liked your idea of someone you cherish looking up at the same sky. Very pretty. My only suggestion is that in the first ...

I personally thought this was very good. I do agree you could add some more original thoughts, but that didn't take away from the poem. The rhyming was beautiful, flowing ...

I like mixtures between historical-fiction, romance and fantasy....especially medieval historical-fiction. As long as it is well-written

Thank you for your suggestions, ohhewwo. It is very much appreciated

Thanks for the suggestions... Do you think I should just ditch the rhyming, niteowl and make it free verse? I think it would be perhaps a little more flowing without ...

This was really cool. I loved your lines about how "I give you my___" and you go on from there. That was a really neat way of setting up. I ...

Okay... I'm going to be brutally honest here. I REALLY didn't like this! We laugh, we cry we talk about that sexy guy we bitch,we talk we laugh aloud as ...