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I would say that I like the Celts, Romans, Greeks and a lot of the ancient English civilizations

I do agree that the stories and poems are agonizingly slow (which is one of the leading reasons I came to YWS), but there still some parts of TYWC that ...

I honestly like the instrumental type of music. I love soundtracks and Celtic type CD's Some of my favorite CD's are: All 3 LOTR soundtracks, Pirates of the Caribbean, Phantom ...

I think makeup is really annoying and don't use it unless on special occasions. It's fine to look nice, but if you're trying to impress someone, I think it's stupid ...

I added a little and attempted to make the meaning more clear. Thanks for your comments everyone :wink:

I thought the books were only so-so. Some of them had some good stories, but they just didn't go deep enough and make you think enough for me. If they ...

I thought this was prettygood. Not the best, but good. I did like your first few lines though I do think you should move 'as if they were' down to ...

Yeah, it was supposed to leave hanging a little... kind of wanting to know more. ohhewwo: Yeah, I've tried my hand at fantasy before and I love it, but as ...

Tapestry of Ages The labyrinth of life Bewildering and mesmerizing A great tapestry of time Intricate and perilous All we can see is the rugged path before us As threads ...

This was really descriptive and pretty good, but could use some work did you see the mashedpurestewed icehailsnow (simply frozen water in different so many millions of forms) mixed up ...

I also found (out of ONOMOTOPOEIA): mope, oat, not, pane, pain, one, moan, poem, net, pet, peat

I absolute loved Ocarina of Tiem but I didn't like Majora's Mask as much. My fave character would have to be Sheik. I can't wait until they come out with ...

Men of Iron by Howard Pyle was probably one of the most amazing older books (close to classic) I've ever read. The language is confusing at times, but the storyline ...

Here's some crit... I don’t really know how to feel you, but maybe by feel I mean show you how I feel, I’ve already touched you, and kissed you, like ...

Wow, I don't usually like love poems, but I loved this one!!! The rhythm was beautiful and the poem flowed even though it had irregular line breaks. I really don't ...