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I don't know how major a role all these plotlines play in your story, but, like Rosey said, passing mentions throughout is the way to go if these plotlines are ...

No problem. :wink: Character sketches are basically when a writer sits down with a character in mind and writes a little portion of a scene, a bit of dialogue or ...

*moved to Writer's Corner* :wink: Now that this is in the right place, your character sounds interesting! I like that you devoted so much time to personality. You mentioned you ...

Hey there Valentine! WD here. Sorry it took me so long to get to this. :wink: All right! I really like this idea; you have some wonderful things going on ...

Hard one, Elinor! I'll start off by saying I have little experience with writing such things, so perhaps I am not the best source of advice, but I will try ...

Mell eyed the pieces of vines that Tin handed her with a touch of amazement, an unexpected warmth bleeding through her as she watched Tin work, weaving the vines together ...

Sorry for not dropping by earlier, Elinor. :wink: Name: Steph Age: 19 Gender: Female ______ Top 3 Movies Title: The Hunchback of Notre Dame Genre: Animated Title: The Kingdom of ...

When it came down to it, Mell did not trust the centaur gods to respect her choices, no more than she trusted the gods of her parents; still, her face ...

Mell's lungs felt heavy from breathing so hard as she stood in the small circle of survivors, both human and centaur, her legs wobbly beneath her from the rough ride. ...

Thanks for your comment, inkwell! But this is a very old poem--about 4 or 5 years old, really, so I'm going to lock it. Have a great day!

Done, m'dear! Hope that helped!

Hi there pudin! WD here, as requested. I am a little rusty critiquing poetry, as I don't really write it anymore, but I will do my best to help you ...

Hey there Gal! Tis WD, as requested. I believe I have warned you, I am very rusty at critiquing poetry, but I will help however I can with this, though ...

The centaur's strong, horselike body moved beneath her, and Mell fumbled with her arrow, her hands shaking; with each strong pound of the centaur's hooves, she felt like she was ...

The nature of the name has to fit your character, and really only you can judge that, but Gaerwn does seem a bit hard to pronounce. Mostly due to the ...