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This was really nice, not the best, but pretty. Here's some crit. Each time you hurt me, You riped my heart away piece by piece, I think you should bring ...

Emma is phenomonal at roleplaying and is really cool. Her avatar rocks as well

Yeah, I love music Thanks for the suggestion. I might just do that I liked reading books that mix historical fiction, romance, adventure, maybe some fantasy (but not with historical ...

Hello everyone. I know I'm not all that new, but I decided to say a little about myself. My name is Stevanie and I absolutely love medieval times, knights, castles, ...

I thought this was really nice, straight to the point. I liked your description of the lady stabbing you, but I think you could go in a little deeper. Like, ...

Is this your website, Black Rose or is it just another one on the internet? If it's yours I'll join, but I don't think I need another website to visit ...

Shadow Knight has a great name. Knights rule!

I have two: There once was a handsome man. There was a pretty lady. They fell in love. *gags* Just awful The other one is actually the worst ending to ...

I've never tried smoking and I certainly do not want to. After my grandfather had some serious health problems because of smoking, I realized how dangerous it was. He had ...

Wow, I really, really liked this. I'm not sure why this touched me, but it really made me think. Very cool. Some of the repeating, elipse stuff didn't really bother ...

niteowl is great and faithful at giving suggestions and criticizing the works of others. :D

This was pretty good. Here's some crit. Is that what you wish to be? Just another face in the crowd A vivid memory erased Times wasted What was once here ...

Thank you so much for your suggestions. I value them a lot

This was ok... wasn't bad, but it really didn't touch me. It was sweet though All the things that make you Are all the things I see Are all the ...

I know this is really long, but I would really like some good criticism here to make it the very best it can be 'cause this poem means a lot ...