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Wow... I never knew people posted their pictures on YWS. This is cool You are very pretty, niteowl

There are various things that inspire me. Stories that I enjoy (usually the really sad ones that have bittersweet endings. Never the modern-day bubbly love stories. They 'uninspire' me if ...

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This was nice. Here's my suggestions: The clouds are dark (I think you should start it differently. This isn't very capturing) and the rain falls black (nice description. I like ...

Hm... I think I get this and I have to say that I liked most of it. You had some very good images in the first few stanzas and I ...

Thanks so much for your suggestions! I edited it to them. You two have helped me a lot.

Again, this is really good. I caught a few spelling errors like Cody said "of couse' instead of "of course", but this was really neat. It's really frightening to see ...

I don't know much about play-writing, but I really liked this! It was really interesting and it made you think. My only suggestions are that you write more of it ...

I believe in the 'God theory', as you all call it, but I really came here to answer the question that this thread was named after Evolution - fact or ...

I normally do not like these kinds of poems, but this one was good. The rhyming was great, simple and not forced. It just flowed ~~~~ I think you should ...

Monotonous drumming echoes dismally As the soldiers march through the once cheerful streets Feigning a precious solemnity Though their hearts are beating In unison to a bleak trudge Beating in ...

:shock: Wow, I feel like I haven't seen you in ages! Happy to see you at YWS

Nickelpicle, like niteowl, is great and helpful with criticizing others' work and helping them improve

I thought it was a really interesting subject to write about and overall liked it. I don't think I can give it crit. right now 'cause I don't know what ...

*smiles* Another clarinet player! Happy me. Yes, I told all my friends at school that when I get IM, my address is going to be medievalobsession. :D