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Re: Freewrite--"the Goodbye"
Perhaps italics would set them off well. It's your decision of course, but that is my suggestion.
May 7, 2005 -
Re: One Word Story Book
Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe hated pickles so ...
Apr 29, 2005 -
Re: What type of killer are you?
assassin. Love that quote
Apr 27, 2005 -
Re: Writersdomain has finally decided to give info!!
Wow, yet another clarinetist I named my clarinet Clarice (Clari) Trebela
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: What kind of weird, inbred dog are you?
chinese crested dog??? Oooookay
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: Do u know Yoshi
60? Yikes, I just guessed!!!!!
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: Heroes of Heart
This is pretty... here's some crit. Heroes of heart, they do not part, I don't like the beginning. The rhyming seems forced and it just does't make sense and grab ...
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: Final Fantasy
This was pretty. It could use some length perhaps to make it cooler, but depending on what you want this to be like, this is good There is a Land ...
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: One Word Story Book
Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potatoe to Joe, because he was imagining naughty pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe hated pickles so ...
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: Writersdomain has finally decided to give info!!
I personally like Sir Gawaine as well...
Apr 26, 2005 -
Re: Death Parade
Thanks Yoshiarmada and Reichieru. Thanks for commenting Thanks, Incandescence. Yes, I tend to make things too long, I agree, I'll take a shot at shortening it soon. I just had ...
Apr 25, 2005 -
Re: One line Summary
I would start laughing at it and smile sweetly, hoping it would go away. What would you do if your computer started laughing at you and calling you names?
Apr 24, 2005 -
Re: Sunday Morning Death Parade
Um... this was pretty and interesting, but I wrote a poem in the dramatic poetry called Death Parade ... It might just be coincidence that our titles resembled each other ...
Apr 24, 2005 -
Re: So tell me...
I don't think that we necessarily have to relate to the character as much as we have to relate to the plot. Characters and races are nice, but the story ...
Apr 23, 2005 -
Re: Comic Books and Manga
I've never read a whole one myself, but sometimes I look on when my friend is reading and I seem to enjoy DNAngel and Trigun. Then of course, I have ...
Apr 23, 2005
