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I am in complete agreement with this considering I find it very annoying and difficult to read chat language Thanks Firestarter

I've had two or three and I knew they were dreams when I was dreaming because they were so awfully bizarre

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What bush?

If the bucket made a sound, is it alive??!

What was the eerie sound?

I really liked this actually. At first, it was kind of... I dunno... awkward, I would say, just a different style. But your last few lines were awesome! Great Job! ...

What color is the bucket?

Thank you soo much for the suggestion Reichieru. I'll break them up right now

You're BLIND?!

The ripples in the water are not gentle anymore I watch heavy glass fall into Shades of translucent blue The water waving to the departing hills Which glide over its ...

I loved this. I have to admit that I liked the Aladdin part no matter how strange it was. Good Job.

I thought this was pretty good. Not that poeti, but good. here's some crit. Of all the poems I’ve sat and written About you, my feelings, and my confusion This ...

I thought it was very good. You really captured and worded your point well. I wish I had some suggestions, but I don't. Keep writing

I liked it a lot. I especially liked your 'Truly Love' part. Beautiful rhyming