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5th for structure, but this was good. Here's some crit I think I’ve given a part of myself away today. I think I’ve sold my (what-ever) soul. I think that ...

^ Has unusual words under her name.. 'Tee hee' that is. I might be crazy, but they make me want to laugh

I'm going to suggest the Wheel of Time series by Robert Jordan or the long series which I forgot teh name of by Janny Wurts

Has an awesome avatar... with a sword in it :D

Would we really turn our backs on a fire?

I thought this was really good and really captured the emotion well. There were just a few things I didn't like... Firstly, my pet peeve is spelling, so I would ...

Woad to Ruin in the King Arthur soundtrack God you are my God by Rich Mullins Here are some of the lyrics from the second Sometimes the night is beautiful ...

This was really pretty and kind of cool, but I usually let my crit speak for itself, so here is some crit. At the crack of dawn the fog came ...

I play clarinet and I just started Marching Band. I named her Clarice or Clari for short. My clarinet's boyfriend is Curtis the bass clarinet. Cheesy, I know, but fun. ...

Star Wars... you know whatever leads to suffering, suffering leads to whatever and whatever leads to the dark side

It did have a lot of emotions... yes, and I thought you expressed it very well. Here's some crit Hello my friend (interesting choice for beginning. Not bad, but interesting) ...

I mean with Ashlee. I might have missed it, but when she ends up in that trailer, it seems very abrupt though the description in that scene was very good.

Oooh, I really liked those last two chapters you posted! You added some good humor in there. I liked it. I think it went just a tad bit too fast. ...

Did the bush burn?

I'm happy because I survived Marching Band Camp... without fainting. I'm also happy that it is so hot out here where I live and that it isn't cold. I'm happy ...