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That is really hard to read. Please break it into stanzas and I will give constructive criticism

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I have to say that I didn't like this either. I'll let my crit speak for itself... Urge A little voice in the back of your head (This does not ...

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I don't know what this should be classified as, so I guessed fantasy fiction Arlen closed her eyes and inhaled sharply as another wave of anxiety washed over her, shaking ...

I loved phantom of the opera. The music was beautiful. Every aspect of it. It's so much fun to sing along with in the car. I especially like the song ...

Whoever said randomness wasn't great?

This was nice. It could be a little more poetic sounding, but hey, it's a father's day poem! Good Job!

First stanza is awesome, but I agree the rest needs a serious rewrite

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I thought this was really good and had some good points. Here's some crit And where am I to turn? Friends and family have been abandoned, I am alone. Cannot ...

Nice, short and simple. It didn't really touch me, but it was well-written The only suggestion I have is using a thesaurus to find some more colorful words

Well, Mattie, how do you define popular? If you mean they post the most, then it makes sense because people see and recognize them the most (this is especially for ...

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Christmas 'cause of all the pretty lights Sunset or Sunrise?