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I really loved this. The only part that bugged me was the 'they's' in the first stanza, but that is just me. Good job

Very straightforward indeed. Not bad, but it seemed to just be telling a story. I wasn't sure if you were trying to tell a story or drive home a point. ...

I really liked this; it drove the point home well. I wasn't exactly fond of the last line, but the rest was great. Nice

^ Has an avatar that has a guy who freaks me out

This was really cute and good. You really made the pixies come to life... Yes, I think you should make it longer.

The mother would go through that for the same reason any other mother does, to bring life into the world or in the case of rejecting abortion, saving a life

I agree with Bobo. The mother doesn't have to keep the child, she can put the child up for adoption, but killing it is just wrong! About abortion being legal ...

Thank you , Reichieru!

^ spelled restaurant wrong on his location ...one of my pet peeves... sorry

I agree that it was beautiful and I really liked it The only thing I noticed at first glance was that you spelled compassion compasion

I have to agree with emotion less. I think it needs more

It looked really interesting, but it also looked frightening. You'll have to tell us how it is.

I thought this was pretty good, but it seemed as if it should be narrative poetry 'cause it just told a story. I didn't see any point beyond the story. ...

^ Is in an interesting location... No, niteowl, you didn't skip my B-day. It's not for a long time :wink:

^ Just pointed out something that I need to change on my profile Yikes! How did that happen?!