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Wow, that was beautiful. I love your imagery and contrasts with words... this was really awesome. Awesome job

I really enjoyed this. Maybe it was a BIT wordy, but not too bad. I agree that an increase in imagery and sounds is good, but this is a beautiful ...

I liked this poem, but for I as well there were things I didn't like. Life is a wind tossed wave that rushes for the shore, time is rushing by, ...

^ has a line that I used? :? :(

^ obviously stated the obvious :P

^ lives in hamburger-a-gogo-land? :shock:

Thanks for the clarification, Rincewind

I'm going to be traveling (again...ugh) this week. Will return on August 14th I think. See ya'all later

^was the first person to greet me on YWS :D

I enjoyed this poem for the most part, but had a few suggestions Hope, so evasive and fleeting (beautiful beginning) In a world so cruel and callous (Okay, cruel and ...

I enjoyed this poem very much. I loved some of your images. the city has lost a certain hold inside ---(this is a little confusing, but it's probably just me. ...

I thought this was very intriguing and very well-written. Excellent. I had only one suggestion. around my throat you came so close to stopping me alive in jail, alive and ...

^her avatar states the obvious so well that it's funny. :D

^Is the amazing jelly girl? :shock:

I really enjoyed this poem because it is a very good subject and is well-expressed. I was not fond of the last line because it sounds awkward with the rest ...