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Wow, this was great. I loved this, Rei! As stated above, there were a few spelling and grammatical errors that could be patched up, but other than that, I loved ...

So you think I should ditch the first person and go for a writing style like Thief of Life where you don't go into characters' thoughts and then pick up ...

Welcome to YWS! I think you're going to like it here. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions or need any of you work commented on or ...

^ says he can't ever remember how to spell Rei's name :shock:

I think that I get this and I really, really liked it. Very nice work. The only thing that bugged me was that you wrote the word 'anatomical art' twice ...

Simple, but sweet. Very nice. I love your spacing of broken and I liked the little rhyme at the end. Nice job.

I really liked this. It has a very unique feel to it and is just great. Nice

I cannot seem to get the indentations right; tab doesn't work and no matter how many spaces I indent it, it always shows up right up against the side. Is ...

“Erhett” – memory churned brutally at the name echoing through my mind. After all these years, the name felt strange on my tongue. Its sting had not yet faded, the ...

Welcome to YWS, Calibur. I am glad that you feel this place will give you honest opinions about your work and feel free to PM me if you need anything ...

^ has no need to be ashamed of being a grammar nut... grammar nuts rock :wink:

Being lied on Pyramaids or cathedrals?

As Snoink stated, the repetition got a little annoying. Words like frozen/freeze/froze were repeated and had an effect at first, but on the second one, it didn't leave an impression ...

This is really nice. Not overly complicated, but not too simple either. There were just a few spelling errors I found and one thing that didn't like. Weill always be ...

^ has an avatar from Hercules :D neat