Writersdomain

Welcome back, Nate. Glad to have you back

^ Her cat avatar looks like it has a white tower with the ponted tip between its eyes

:cry: Goodbye, Bobo. We will all miss you :(

This was interesting, but there were parts I did not like. Time has passed and I have healed, So don't think I still feel for you. The tide’s gone out ...

I can't see your avatar, Incandescence :( Sureal, is your avatar a snow leopard? If so, I love it!

^ seems to think Fontroy has a higher opinion of her work than deserved... Haven't read Pastel Unicorn yet, but I do think some of your other stuff deserves to ...

^said something about Liz I didn't understand Huh? :?v oh never mind

^ Has a great statement about rocks in her siggy :wink:

I tried adding the story stanzas as well. Tell me how you like it Solemn eyes watering silently Glistening as her soft smile fills my gaze Tears well in my ...

The first part was very good besides the things that people mentioned above. The only other thing I noticed was here you say: "Look around your necks ... each one ...

^ Has a KNIGHT for his avatar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :shock: :shock: :D :D :D :P :lol: :) :) :) :) :D :shock: :shock: :shock: :oops:

Wow, this was really good. I really enjoyed this Liz. The only thing I caught was that obstuctions should be obstructions I believe. This was beautiful. You portrayed the girl's ...

Please stay nearby You know I try To not let your memory Pass me by Do not cry Let me die Just hold my hand And say goodbye No need ...

^ Wrote Little Girl, Not a Little Girl which was an amazing monologue!

^ likes to write stories directed towards younger ages