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^ Is a protective prince... :)

My first original (not some fanfic or something) story was written in 2nd or 3rd grade and it was a rough time for me because not many people wanted to ...

I thought this had some very good word uses and overall, I liked it, but the rhythm bugged me. I understand that not all poems should rhythm, but with your ...

It describes Writer's Block so well, I couldn't help but to like it... blank except for the words I mean to write; empty except for the torrent of good ideas ...

I thought this was interesting, but I can't say I really liked it. Firstly, it seemd a little... I dunno... too SIMPLE. Don't take me wrong, simple is not usually ...

^ Has a really cool quote in her siggy.... It's so inspiring, TBR

^ obviously likes the word 'spiffy'

^ In his sig, he mentions a deafening croak from a frog... that must be a pretty loud frog :wink:

As PsyLynx said, the beginning was really good; I enjoyed how you painted a picture that brought me to the moment; I could almost see the scenes you described, but ...

I really enjoyed this. Besides the spelling mistakes, it flowed very well and you made the words come alive. Very nice. Please keep writing

^ noticed that I have my old avatar again... :wink:

^ has a very inspiring quote from Benjamin Franklin :D

I actually enjoyed this. It was very interesting and really intrigued me. The only things I didn't like were your usage of the word 'smashed'. I'm sorry, but 'smashed the ...

^ Thinks that life is a big puzzle with one piece missing....

I don't want to even think about packing for school. Going into a new high school is making me freak out about it.