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*glares* You spelled pet peeves wrong on the title and my pet peeve is incorrect spelling

^ the gift-giver's avatar has a sword behind her back... :wink:

^ Her goat is awesome

^ has an absolutely gorgeous avatar

This had a dreamy feel to it; I thought it was quite good but I do have some suggestions Daydreams and distant memories Whisk my heart in light so sweet. ...

I liked this a lot. It instilled this feeling that made me just want to reach out and help the person in need. A very good job. The few things ...

*shakes head overwhelmed* there are too many to list...

^ thought I was a guy? :shock: That's creepy

Very nicely done. The only thing that remotely bothered me were the verbs in your firstline. I don't know why, but they seemed kind of awkward, especially suck, but that ...

Wow, just beautiful. Nice job

Writersdomain (Stev) Preferably poetry PM (a link to your piece might be nice) I'll give constructive, honest and sometimes brutal critiques. I focus mostly on word choice, grammar and my ...

^ his avatar looks more noble than before :wink:

My thoughts echo those above. The rhyming was too forced. You don't have to rhyme and if you do, you need to really think about the words you use before ...

700? Wow... #254... and I thought the site was enormous when I first came...

I have to agree with bubblewrapped here... Firstly, as bubblewrapped said, it seemed like just word-building. You were throwing out a bunch of contrasts and it seemed as if they ...