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Re: The Little Match Girl
Hi there DaughterofEvil! I'm WD, here to review your story! So, as has been said, this is lovely in parts because of its simplicity. You have a way at landing ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Destiny brought them together but destiny also brought him
Hi there Charlii101! I'm WD and it's lovely to meet you! Haha, so this takes me back to the days of junior high and some high school with make overs ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Dance Your Dream
Hey there sweethearts! Welcome to YWS! I'm WD, and it's lovely to meet you! I had a good time reading this piece you posted and I'm glad that I'm getting ...
Sep 8, 2011 -
Re: Putting an end
Hey there, Adriana! Interesting piece you have here! I'm WD and it's lovely to meet you. So, I think you did a good job of conveying some of the confusion ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: The courses of true love never did run smooth
Hi there Euhuman! Nice to meet you! I'm WD. So, I enjoyed a lot of the ideas going on here. You struck a few lovely lines, characterizing the main character ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Nostalgia
Hi there! :] Tis WD! Great to see you posting again! I'm excited that I stumbled across this! I haven't read your work in a long time. There is some ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: The Angel (Chapter One)
Hey there xMidnightWriterx! This was a good read! It's very easy to write funerals badly, to err on the side of melodrama, but this actually worked pretty well. Your main ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Ghosts
Hey there alissende! First of all, welcome to YWS! Great to see you around here, posting already. I enjoyed reading this; the dialogue was snappy in parts which really caught ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Dynamic Avatar Retrospective
Creepy as it was, I remember being very proud of that avatar. :P
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: New/Awesome: Automatic Post Recovery
This is awesome! =D
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: Any fellow Robin Hobb fans?
Fellow Robin Hobb fan here! I liked her first trilogy (especially Assassin's Apprentice) the best. The Liveship Traders was okay, though I feel like it was struggling to juggle its ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Are there any other websites like YWS?
Moved to The Lounge. :)
Jan 19, 2011 -
Re: YWS Over The Years
Those screenshots bring back a lot of memories. :P I feel old now. Thanks for posting all these, Nate!
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Find Me
Hi there ShadowLight! I'm WD, and it's lovely to meet you! I had fun reading this--you have a lovely style and I like the simplicity of the narrative voice. For ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Sara's Lilacs
Hey there GrenadeCatcher! This is an interesting piece! The perspective here is unique--that of a ten year old girl, lying dead in spirit. You have a nice tendency to describe, ...
Jan 12, 2011