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So I've thought of this great underground market as a setting. But the question is, what the heck is supposed to go in it? It's not really you're traditional "Black ...

My hand smoothed over my lover's back. Muscles twitched and relaxed under my touch and a soft sigh escaped to one next to me. My lips followed the path of ...

I liked this piece a lot! I only found a couple quick errors. "none the less the country" I think 'never mind the country' would sound better here. None the ...

So, usually I do a lot of nit-picking, but I think most of the stuff I was going to say was already pointed out. I'm just going to reiderate the ...

This is definitely an interesting idea. I'm just curious about the title. You call them runaways, but are they really runaways or possible orphans? Be careful of mixed tenses. You ...

I haven't read the first part of this but I definitely want to! It seems very fun. Your characters are totally relatable and I love that. There are only a ...

Sorry if this seems a little brutal, but I'm just trying to help. First of all, I agree with pinkangel that you should probably brush up on some of your ...

Thanks for all the corrections! I can't believe I made so many! I must not have looked it over again in my processor after I took a break. Thanks for ...

This is the Prologue and first chapter of something I thought up. Any kind of feedback, including ideas, is helpful. Thanks! Prologue We might have become a known race, but ...

hi, I'm looking for a pretty brutal review for this piece cuz I like it alot Unsolved Mystery fantasy

Hi, ovbiously I'm WritersBlock and I'm here to pick at your piece, but luckily I didn't find much to possibly change :) so let's get started! The animal moved silently, ...

This is really fantastic and I hope you keep writing, but I do have a few things to pick at. There was a sweet aroma, full of spices and honey ...

Arms wound around my stomach, caging me against a much larger body. Hot breath puffed against the back of my ear, tickling. A low growl shivered over my senses; making ...

Your grammar and spelling are very good and the story is interesting. I'm just going to pick at a couple of things: "long a go" this is one word " ...

Although it will be redundant and hypocritical(since I'm a description maniac), I will once again point out the amount of description. It's not all bad, but there might be a ...