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Re: Night time
] great descriptions about night time, matt! (Can I call you Matt?) and nice personification with the trees. :D ] sorry if I only leave a short comment here, like ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Intertwined
] it's too short but I love it. I also felt like I wish this could be longer, because I want more of this! :D sooo great!! ] love the ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Sorry
] whoa, love this poem... :) what else can I say? I am not really a good editor, and I don't really have anything to change here.. so good job!
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: King of Pirates, Queen of Soul 2
You might be unfamiliar with the word barangay. What is barangay? Wikipedia says all. According to it. A barangay is the smallest administrative division in the Philippines and is the ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: iced tea
] I love iced teas! And so is this poem! GREAT!!!!!
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Entry for the NaPoWriMo Contest!
He was in love, I am in love, We are in love, This is love. The way we talk about a star, No matter if we're afar, The way we ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: My Fallen Star
whoa- really love the essence of love in this poem.. :) although it was a little sad because the boy/ man died here. :'0
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Staring Contest
Whoa! Hahaha! A staring match could really KILL!! :D
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Pizza
Hello! - this poem is really narrative! - wow, I am thankful for super dads thinking like that :D - this is really cute, haha! - *ran-out-of-words*
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: The Forbidden Fruit
I wish I wasn't, but I'm dawn in I wish i wasn't, but I am - isn't it supposed to be "drawn in" ? The way she lays there so ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Although My Life is Passing by
Hello, Jessa! This poem's really a good one! :D I love EMily Dickinson, and yes, this is one good poem that you made!
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: King of Pirates, Queen of Soul 1
Had this edited with the help of Subzerodemon's review. Thank you! CHAPTER ONE Seven years ago.. Analia was a sixteen-year-old, senior, high school student. She still possessed the beauty she ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: when the morning light comes.
Good! Good poem! I like how you have been so descriptive! :D haha! No more other things to say!
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: You've Lost Me
Cool! *speechless*
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: Sin
Master your sin before she becomes your master!
Apr 14, 2011
