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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Night time

    ] great descriptions about night time, matt! (Can I call you Matt?) and nice personification with the trees. :D ] sorry if I only leave a short comment here, like ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Intertwined

    ] it's too short but I love it. I also felt like I wish this could be longer, because I want more of this! :D sooo great!! ] love the ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sorry

    ] whoa, love this poem... :) what else can I say? I am not really a good editor, and I don't really have anything to change here.. so good job!

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: King of Pirates, Queen of Soul 2

    You might be unfamiliar with the word barangay. What is barangay? Wikipedia says all. According to it. A barangay is the smallest administrative division in the Philippines and is the ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: iced tea

    ] I love iced teas! And so is this poem! GREAT!!!!!

    Apr 16, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Entry for the NaPoWriMo Contest!

    He was in love, I am in love, We are in love, This is love. The way we talk about a star, No matter if we're afar, The way we ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: My Fallen Star

    whoa- really love the essence of love in this poem.. :) although it was a little sad because the boy/ man died here. :'0

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Staring Contest

    Whoa! Hahaha! A staring match could really KILL!! :D

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Pizza

    Hello! - this poem is really narrative! - wow, I am thankful for super dads thinking like that :D - this is really cute, haha! - *ran-out-of-words*

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Forbidden Fruit

    I wish I wasn't, but I'm dawn in I wish i wasn't, but I am - isn't it supposed to be "drawn in" ? The way she lays there so ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Although My Life is Passing by

    Hello, Jessa! This poem's really a good one! :D I love EMily Dickinson, and yes, this is one good poem that you made!

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: King of Pirates, Queen of Soul 1

    Had this edited with the help of Subzerodemon's review. Thank you! CHAPTER ONE Seven years ago.. Analia was a sixteen-year-old, senior, high school student. She still possessed the beauty she ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: when the morning light comes.

    Good! Good poem! I like how you have been so descriptive! :D haha! No more other things to say!

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: You've Lost Me

    Cool! *speechless*

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sin

    Master your sin before she becomes your master!

    Apr 14, 2011


But there was no goat man, there was NEVER any goat man!
— OSP Red